With your classmate, read the signs and compare ideas as to
which of these holidays you would prefer.
As you might have guessed, this blog’s topic is again
related to holidays; summer holidays!
Can you
remember the last time you went on holiday during the summer? Ask your friend 4
questions related to this topic.
Now you’ll
start writing. Think about your last summer holiday. You have to include:
-Where you went and Who was
there ( provide a brief description)
- Where
you stayed and a short description of the place.
- Descriptions related to your senses: Smells,tastes, sensations of touch, sounds like
voices, chants, etc., Colors, and shapes
- What your favourite part of the holidays was and why, and what you would like to do next summer.
WORD COUNT : 240
Tips: When you need to write longer texts, it’s
always best to start with a short pre-writing exercise.
You can use the ‘spider’ map on your copy book
first, to decide what you’ll write about first, the most important
characteristics about each element you want to include, vocabulary you’d like
to use, and how your piece will end.
Use these diagrammes to organise your ideas. List some of the words and connectors you’d like to include ( you can add the connectors in the 'other' column)
Remember you should post here and in your classmates' blogs.
Sample
Last summer, I
went to El Canelo, a tiny beach
located in Algarrobo. It's small but extremely beautiful and colourful. It
was February, so the weather was warm and sunny. Given that my parents have been living there for almost 4 years, I
stayed in their house for a few days.
One
thing that has always called my attention is the way the air feels in El Canelo; it has a distinctive,
sort of minty and cool scent, which feels a bit cold (and salty!) and yet pleasant. Silence is also something very unique about this area;
you can only hear a few people in the afternoon as they walk towards the beach,
but mostly, you can hear birds chirping
and tree leaves in the wind…very peaceful!
In
the mornings we did some
gardening and read a bit, then my dad cooked something special and tasty, and then
we talked about our lives and shared memories at the dinner table (very Chilean custom!). I really enjoyed walking
down a small forest near the beach, because in the summer the colours and hues
of flowers, bushes and waves of course are very intense and vivid. However, I have to say that my favourite part was spending time and talking
to my parents, because I seldom see them and I miss them a lot.
I’d have to say that everything was just as I expected; I was able to unwind and spend time with
my loved ones. I surely hope I am able
to do the same next summer, though I’d definitely like to have more time!
Word count: 265
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